Grimsdyke School Story Writing Competition

Last summer the Hatch End Association and Grimsdyke School joined forces to organise a story writing competition to help celebrate the Queen’s Diamond Jubilee. We were so impressed by the standard of writing that we decided to award a prize to the best entry in each of the seven years at the school. Each child received a book token. See below for the prize winners’ entries.

Nethra Hariharana – Reception Class

Nethra Hariharana Diamond Jubilee Drawing

Nethra Hariharana

My istent [assistant] wakes me up then I brush my teeth then I wake my corgis and ride my horse. Then I go to my corgie party I was so tiered [tired] I went to bed. The next day I went for my friends wedding I had lots of food and I went on eating I had so much fun we had to go for an other wedding. We played a Lot this time we had so much fun we had to go home then. Inviet [invite] the pepel owh [who] went for the wedding. So they invieted the pepel so they were so tiered they.

Nilukshi Emmanuela – Year 1

I woke up I waw [was] really thriled when it was I had my special dress on. It was a diamond dress. I went in my enomores [enormous] gold cargei [carriage] I seted of. I went to the Thames River Pagent it waw relly nice. There was lose of boats just for me. On the last day I went to a school I went to the conset [concert] it was fun for me there was Jessie J.

Ella Lakhania – Year 2

As I opened my eyes my maid came in and said “Majesty time to get up you don’t want to miss the best day ever!” she said peacfully. The[n] my maid opened my curtains. Meanwhile I went downstairs. It was really nice of my sons because they put a red carpet down the stairs. It was very generous of them. Then I had my brekfast I had a cookie of me it was delishous. Then I put on my royal sparkly glamouros and white dress.

Then I went in my bright pink limo and went to the River Tems. I got there then unfortunly it started raining. But luckly I had an umbrella so that I didn’t get wet at all. And then royaly I got on to my boat, it had bells, opre [opera] music. It was relly royal. Everyone was screaming and shouting. They were even waving flags that had pictures of me.

There were over 10000 boats there. When I got home I was egsoursted [exhausted] and tired so I went to bed.

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